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    Gabriel, the Agent of Chaos (Champion Concept)

    Admittedly, I'm not good at balancing. So yeah suggestions about balancing things onto this guy would be very appreciated!!
    Also the Anemone Empire mentioned in a new faction that I will explain in another champion concept I have planned out ^^

    Onto the fun stuff!


    "Tick tock, you're the worst."
    Name: Gabriel
    Title: The Agent of Chaos
    Class: Flank
    HP: 1800
    Species: Human (?)
    Side: None (Formerly) / Anemone Empire (Currently)
    How to Unlock: Have at least 1 Champion of each class at Level 30 (1 Front Line, 1 Support, 1 Flank, 1 Damage at least)




    Lore: Ruthless on the streets and palaces alike,Gabriel used to be a legendary thief, leader of a merciless gang, composing of street urchins just like him, very much feared across nations. Bounties of millions of gold and even crystals by desperate noblemen were on his head and dubbed as “The agent of Chaos” from them. The Outer Tribunary's worst enemy would be Gabriel himself, constantly taunting and poking fun at the officers simply trying to do their jobs.

    His attractive appearance and sharp mind got him out of trouble constantly,getting away with the most brutal of muggings and the fastest of burglaries. That would end,however,when the Anemone Empire acquired its tyrant.

    Hearing about the tyrant’s mythical riches, Gabriel rushed to get some, only to be swiftly met with the cold feeling of the steel belonging to the bodyguard’s scythe. The young tyrant had successfully trapped the legendary thief in a situation where no sweet words, bribes or brutal attack would save him now. The tyrant’s next action was to command his archmages to erase the young thief’s memories completely,turning him into nothing more than a mindless puppet for his own use.

    Now Gabriel,forced to succumb to the tyrant in return for immense magical power,is more than willing to shed blood across the Realm,in order for the Empire to flourish from it.


    Visuals: A very attractive young man,wearing a dark blue torn jacket which is said to had been a long coat before,alongside a loose white shirt held back by a belt with the emblem of Anemone Empire,black pants torn at the bottom,and short black boots which carry a knife on the back. He has spiky blue hair with a prominent ahoge,and yellow eyes.



    Skills

    Throwing Stars (LMB)
    Throw 2 sharp blades in the shape of stars, for 450 damage each.
    ~Throws 2 chains at a time.
    ~Has no ammo or reload.
    ~No damage drop-off, but will only work in close range to mid range due to gravity.



    Trapping Knives (RMB)
    Throw two rusty stars, dealing 10 damage each at contact and slowing the enemy down for 6s.
    ~Gain 3% Ultimate Charge if you hit both blades.
    ~Has a cooldown of 7 seconds.


    Sneak (F)
    Throw a series of stars and then throw yourself on them, then climb them up.
    ~The array of stars is determined by how you throw the stars in a wall.
    ~Has a cooldown of 15 seconds.


    Deceit (Q)
    Use your master’s dark magic to transform into an enemy player’s champion temporarily. Lasts 20 seconds before turning back to normal form.
    ~Champions are selected randomly.
    ~Has a timer on the side of the screen counting backwards.
    ~Has a cooldown of 25 s.
    ~Can be cancelled early by reactivating the skill.
    ~Gabriel can use all of the targeted champion’s abilities,except for their talents and ultimates.
    ~Deceit will be broken in death or after a certain amount of damage is taken. (700 damage).




    Bedlam (E) (Ultimate) [courtesy of broccolitim, thank you!!]
    Turn into a enemy of choice but with a minimum of 3000 health and a maximum of 4000. 2500 damage before changing back (or after 15s). Everything except for the ultimate is copied and can only be use once(abilities).


    Cards


    Sneak

    Hypersonic: Increase your speed while climbing by 10-50%.

    Counterfeit Cover: Sneak grants you 5-25% Damage Reduction for 3s after its duration ends.

    Mine!: Sneak grants you 5-25% lifesteal for your next attacks for 3s.

    On The Run: Reduce the cooldown of Sneak by 1/2/3/4/5 seconds.




    Trapping Knives

    Loyalty: Hitting both Trapping Knives reduce the cooldown of Sneak by 0.5-2.5s.

    Capture Them: Enemies hit by Trapping Knives are slowed for an extra 1-5s.

    Rebellion: Kills reduce the cooldown of Trapping Knives by 20-100%.

    Patience is Virtue: Successful hits with Trapping Knives grant your weapon shots 5-25% life steal for 5s.


    Deceit

    Imposter: Reduce the cooldown of Deceit by 2/4/6/8/10 seconds.

    Target Found: Transforming into a champion grants you 10-50% movement speed when out of combat.

    Fool’s Play: Kills during Deceit reduce all active cooldowns by 20-100%.

    Clever Boy: Activating Deceit heals you for 50-250.



    Armor/Weapon

    Assassin’s Honor: Eliminations reduce 10-50% of all cooldowns.

    Hitman’s Roulette: Gain 5-25% movement speed when out of combat.

    Lost Memories: Gain 50-250 Health.

    The Empire Yearns: When under 40% of health,gain 10-50% Damage Reduction for 3s.


    Talents

    Chaos: Landing both stars in a target applies a Bleed effect that lasts up to 2 seconds. (Default)


    Grudge: Trapping Knives deal 30% more damage and now they apply a cripple effect for 2s,but no longer slow. (Unlocks at Level 2)


    A Traitor Among Us: Deceit’s cooldown is reduced by 20 seconds and now can copy talents,but now lasts 10s less. (Unlocks at level 8)


    Kill Taunts (Because who the fuck doesn't love interactions)

    When killed by...
    > "You're.... next!"
    > "I'm still the superior rogue!" (Maeve)
    > "What.... are you!" (Seris)
    > "Die in a hole!" (Lex)

    When he kills...
    > "Missed me. Again." (Lex)
    > "Back to your place." (Lian)
    > "So quick and cute, and yet utterly useless! Like always!" (Maeve)
    > "Ugh, chill out old man." (Khan)
    > "You cold b*tch...!" (Evie)
    > "Hahaha, so much for a dragon keeper!" (Imani)
    Last edited by WonderfulPower; 07-03-2019 at 12:58 PM.
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    that deceit ability sounds like a lot of chaotic fun, i love reading these kinds of concepts, but they get me really pissed at evil mojo for not adding them to the game
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    Thank you! I was really trying to go with that "deceitful assassin" theme with Gabriel. I'd love to see Deceit being used sometime, however imagine the bugs that it'd bring xD
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    Main weapon does look like Maeve's a lot.

    I really like the 'Deceit' ability though. Only problem, when using the "a traitor among us' talent and picking the 'Imposter' card even at level 1, you can use Deceit back to back. Or if you run it at 5, the skill is way too powerful. So probably cacnge the cooldown to 25s and change the talent?

    Also, when you focus on other abilities, Deceit becomes kinda bad. (35s cooldown, you probably will use it once before dying. (again maybe 25? (and also nerf the ability a bit))

    The problem with the "imposter' cards is that a 5-10s cooldown decrease is that the level 1 version is stronger than the rest of the levels because you get 5s instead of 1. So instead of 5/6/7/8/10s cooldown decrease, 2/4/6/8/10 is a better idea.

    Rush also feels kinda "Maevy".

    The ultimate is not groundbreaking. Idea:
    Turn into a enemy of choice but with a minimum of 3000 health and a maximum of 4000. 2500 damage before changing back (or after 15s). Everything except for the ultimate is copied and can only be use once(abilities).

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    Thank you kindly for your feedback. You're right about the talent and the card, perhaps I'll change the Imposter card to something more useful for Gabriel, or maybe the talent itself. I'll be sure to nerf it xD

    I really like the Ultimate idea! Really fits into the deceitful assassin theme!
    I'll think about more things about the character and his cards/weapons/traits and will update this thread soon
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    UPDATED

    ~Changed the weapon.
    ~Changed a couple of cards.
    ~Changed the F ability.
    ~Reduced the cooldown of Deceit to 25 seconds.
    ~Changed the ultimate.
    "I'LL HANDLE THIS!"


    Damage: Lian, Cassie, Tyra
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    thought this would be a good place to post this
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    Gabriel's Deceit in a nutshell xD
    "I'LL HANDLE THIS!"


    Damage: Lian, Cassie, Tyra
    Flank: Maeve, Evie, Skye
    Front Line: Khan, Ash, Fernando
    Support: Ying, Seris, Furia, Grover, Jenos

    MY CHAMPION CONCEPTS: http://forums.paladins.com/showthrea...mpion-Concept) http://forums.paladins.com/showthrea...mpion-Concept)

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    UPDATE: Added some taunts.
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    Damage: Lian, Cassie, Tyra
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    Support: Ying, Seris, Furia, Grover, Jenos

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