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Thread: [Hero Concept] Louie the Lion-Hearted (Flank Champion) [Fixed]

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    Exclamation Louie the Lion-Hearted (Flank Champion) Mega Update

    Louie The Lion-Hearted

    Louie was born as a friend to no one and loved by few, despite being of noble birth his subpar skills as a swordsman and leader got him ousted from house Aico. This would have been his end if he had not met the Fae. Inspired by his peaceful ways the Fae showed him the beautiful magic of nature. Now wielding his best friend and familiar rapier Leopold he has returned to the realm.

    Move speed: 370
    Health: 1900
    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Abilities

    Leopold (Left Click) *Basic Fire*
    Thrusts at enemies with Leopold creating magic blasts that deal 600 dmg up to medium range every 1.5 seconds.
    Passive: Hitting an enemy with attacks places stacks of Contratempo on them and 3 stacks apply a 1 sec slow to enemies.
    • Has 5 ammo


    Parry/Lion’s Thrust (Right click) 1 s/4 s
    Times his strikes with his enemies to block them and heal for 100
    Taps into Leopold’s strength to deliver a thrust in a frontal cone that deals 200 dmg
    • Can be used aerially.

    Roaring Tempo Q 15 s
    Channels Leopold spirit becomes untargetable for 2 secs and does a short spin dealing 600 dmg. This increases the attack speed of Leopold to .5 secs for 6 secs.
    Activating Roaring Tempo switches Parry to Lion's Thrust for 10s (can be canceled by pressing again)

    Lion’s Traverse F 6 s
    Louie retreats in a backward or forward direction then gains 15% move speed for 4 secs
    • Direction is determined by input

    Lion’s Cartel E
    Louie channels the full power of the Lion throws Leopold into the air then increases his movement speed by 30% and rushes forward challenging the first enemy he touches to a duel. This creates a zone trapping the enemy inside. No healing or dmg reduction can be applied while in the zone. Dmg taken is increased by 15% and Louie’s dmg is increased by 15%. (last 10 secs)
    • Transforms Louie into a Lion beast which moves 10% faster
    Those outside the field are unable to dmg those within.
    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Talents

    Lion’s Pride
    Louie can now receive healing at 50% the value while Lion’s Cartel is active, and the charge rate is increased by 20%

    Al La Macchia
    Parry is unusable and Lion’s Thrust now has 3 charges and its dmg is increased by 50% (dmg goes up to 300)

    Cavalier’s Step
    The cooldown of all abilities is reduced by 1s and parrying gives 1 ammo
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    Voice lines
    Champion Selection
    "Louie"

    Introduction
    "Let's get started, Leopold"
    "We refuse to be anyone's pawn"

    Mounting up
    "I need your speed, my friend"
    "Let's ride to victory"

    Abilities


    Contratempo
    "Slow down knave" (leopold)

    Parry
    "Ha!"
    "Grunts*"

    Lion's Thrust
    "En garde!"
    "Thrust!"

    Roaring Tempo
    "Graaah"
    "Grunts*"

    Lion's Traverse
    "You can't out pace me"(backward/side)
    "This duel isn't done yet" (Forward)

    Lion's Cartel
    "With a Lion's Roar I challenge you!"(enemy/self)
    "Roars*"(ally)

    Attempting to use an ability on cooldown
    "Don't Test Leopold"
    "Don't control my tempo"

    Taking Dmg
    "Show me your Skill"
    "Agh help friends!"

    Death
    "Aico was right maybe I can't be useful for once"
    "Aico didn't need me but the Fae do"
    "Stay strong Louie you will survive" (Leopold)

    "For once Lion's aren't the kings of beasts"(Maeve)
    "Us cats should've stuck together (Leopold to Maeve)

    "Khan... You would kill even me for the house" (Khan)
    "You were like a sister to me" (Lian)

    "Willo you saved me only to end me!?" (Willo)


    First Blood
    "Cavaliers might stop at first blood, but Lions don't" (Leopold)

    Kill Streak
    "I only kill when needed"
    "Bloodshed only breeds more Bloodshed"
    "I will carry out the will of the Fae"

    Kill Taunt
    "I guess I'm the top cat round here" (Leopold to Maeve)
    "Stuck-up princesses don't always win" (Lian)
    "I can't lose all of our duels" (Lian)
    "There is more to life than house Aico" (Khan)
    "Real warriors don't kill for sport" (Zhin)
    "Willo... I never wanted this" (Willo)
    "How could I have let Aico control me" (Willo)
    [Fan Concept]"There shall be only be one!" (Leopold to Leopold)

    Victory
    "I have honored my saviors"
    "Magistrate or Paladins, the war is finally over"

    Defeat

    "Will I... have to fight for Aico again"
    "I fought for what I believe, now I can die happy"

    Taunt

    "Your step, it is lacking go back to your hobble and practice" (Leopold)
    " Sniff* Sniff* what is that smell oh...its your fear of our duel" (Leopold)
    "Wow your tempo is worse than me before I met the Fae and that is saying something."

    Jokes
    "Ugh! Can someone please help me convince Leo that the words Lian and Lion are different the first however being much more dangerous. "
    "Oh, I can see we are all lioning up for some fun"
    "Louie, No, I don't want some catnip... Wait! don't throw it away just leave it near my hilt." (Leopold)

    Spawn Chatter
    "Willo lets have some fun with these knaves" (Leopold to Willo)
    "Willo your awesome but don't just blow everyone away" (Willo)
    "I am more useful than you think" (Lian)
    "Outcast or not to me I'm still part of Aico" (Lian/Khan)
    "Ooh nice rifle, I would touch it but, me and guns, however, don't exactly mix" (Kinessa)
    [Fan Concept] "Lets get this fight started Leopold! ..... Wait there is a Leopold that isn't a sword!?." (Louie to Leopold)
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    Cards

    Armor/Weapon

    Cavalier's Focus
    Gain 1-5 ammo

    Dancing Step
    Eliminations reduce cooldowns by 15%-75%

    Fae's Chosen
    Gives 50-250 health

    Atajo
    Contratempo's slow duration is increased by .25-1s.

    Parry/Lion's Thrust

    On point
    Increase the dash distance of Thrust by 5-25 units

    En Garde
    Increase the speed of Parry by .1-.5s,

    Belief
    Thrust heals for 75-375 health

    Lunge
    The cooldown for Thrust is lowered by .5-2.5s for each enemy hit

    Roaring Tempo

    Lion's Rage
    Decrease the cooldown of Roaring Tempo By 5%-30%

    Familiar's protection
    Roaring Tempo increase attack speed for .5s-2.5s more

    Poking
    Thrust lasts for 1s-5s longer

    True Freedom
    Roaring Tempo heals for 50-250 for every champ hit.

    Lion's Traverse

    Abandonment
    Increase movement speed bonus after Traverse by 2%-10%

    Circus Act
    Increase Jump distance during Traverse by 5-25 units

    Bound
    The cooldown on Traverse is refreshed when below 10%-50% health
    •8s cooldown

    Mana Restock
    Traverse generates 1-5 ammo

    Creator's Notes: Louie's Kit is focused on speed rather than consistent dmg. He is best for people who like to consistently hound after enemies at low health and nail shots. All his Skills except traverse count as weapon hits so caut/wrecker is applied on them. I wanted parry to be the hardest to use but most rewarding part of his kit since it gives you frames of intangibility and healing depending on whether you can time your block with an enemy's attack. The ability parry is meant to be a skill oriented move rather than a duration counter like Zhin's, so in other words it requires timing and precise placement to work effectively and does no dmg.This means he is great at parrying shots from blast or burst champs but horrible at dealing with shots from the various assault rifle/machine gun champs.
    Last edited by FarceDawn; 12-08-2018 at 03:49 PM.
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    I would love if I could get some opinions from those who read this on my champion concept.
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    There are some good parts and bad parts. The slow effect on the LMB is cool, and it makes sense because the weapon works better at closer range. I like the F because it's versatile and can be used creatively. The Ultimate is also pretty nice. I'm not too sure about the RMB and Q, however. They seem very bland and underwhelming.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Harlequin98 View Post
    There are some good parts and bad parts. The slow effect on the LMB is cool, and it makes sense because the weapon works better at closer range. I like the F because it's versatile and can be used creatively. The Ultimate is also pretty nice. I'm not too sure about the RMB and Q, however. They seem very bland and underwhelming.
    I guess when I thought of the RMB and Q I was thinking of more utility than uniqueness. Lion's thrust is meant to close distances and deal quick burst dmg. I also thought of it as a way to allow Louie to scale walls in places like serpent's beach since dealing with champs with aerial mobility or the ability to camp is a problem that a lot of flanks have.

    I just thought of the idea that maybe his right click could be a short range parry that deals no dmg but heals upon hit and requires timing to work effectively. While his q could still apply the original effect but change his his right click to thrust.


    Also thanks for the feedback!!!
    Last edited by FarceDawn; 12-02-2018 at 03:17 PM.
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