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    Revenge Front Line Concept



    Haemon, the Scourge
    4900 Health
    LMB: Veraclaw
    Fire a projectile every 0.8s that deals 500 damage. Suffers from damage falloff as soon as it is fired, before fizzling out. 5 ammo, 2s reload. Reloading releases dark magic, knocking back enemies close around you.

    RMB: Rage
    Enemies that deal damage to you are marked for 2s. Marked enemies can be targeted by Rage, launching a fast projectile at them, dealing 120 damage per enemy marked and knocking enemies up and towards you. 6s cooldown.

    Q: Challenge
    You and allies near you gain 15% damage reduction for 5s. Every 100 Health you are missing when activated increases the damage reduction by 1%. 13s cooldown.

    F: Aggression
    Launch your claws, and teleport to them when they hit a surface. If you hit an enemy, grab them and leap upwards, slamming them into the ground on the way down. Deals 500 damage and Stuns for 0.5s. 12s cooldown.

    E (Ultimate): Grudge
    Charge for 3s, dealing 2000 damage to yourself over that time. Then fire a projectile that deals damage equal to your missing Health. Pierces enemies, Shields and Deployables. If you die while charging, you trigger a short range explosion that deals 100% of your Health as damage.

    [Talents]

    Provocation : Every 600 damage dealt to you reduces the cooldown of Challenge by 1s.

    Trample : Aggression now bypasses Shields and deals 200 more damage.

    Deal with the Devil : Lose 1000 Maximum Health. Gain 400 Credits. (Switching to or from this Talent resets your credits and items)

    [Loadout Cards]

    (Weapon/Armor)
    -You cannot be slowed below {60|10}% of your Movement Speed.
    -Kills and Eliminations reduce active cooldowns by {8|8}%.
    -Dropping below 50% of your Health gives you a {150|150} Health Shield for 3s. 30s internal cooldown.
    -Gain {5|5}% lifesteal below 50% Health.

    (RMB)
    -Reduce the cooldown of Rage by {0.5|0.5}s.
    -Restore {20|20}% of the damage dealt by Rage.
    -Increase the knockup of Rage by {6|6}%.
    -Hitting an enemy with Rage reduces the cooldown of Aggression by {1|1}s.

    (Q)
    -Gain {5|5}% Movement Speed while Challenge is active.
    -Increase the radius of Challenge by {10|10}%.
    -Increase the duration of Challenge by {0.4|0.4}s.
    -Allies affected by Challenge restore {100|100} Health over 5s.

    (F)
    -Hitting an enemy with Aggression restores {1|1} ammo.
    -Reduce the cooldown of Aggression by {0.8|0.8}s.
    -Restore {100|100} Health after activating Aggression.
    -Increase the speed of Aggression by {8|8}%.

    Champion Selection
    - "Haemon."

    Introduction
    - "I won’t rest! Not until every stone is broken, every wall caked with blood, every blade of grass burned to a crisp!"
    - "Cower in fear! Hide behind your walls! Scream for help as I tear them apart brick by brick!"

    Mounting Up
    - "Through the fire and flames!"
    - "Faster!"

    [Skills]

    Rage
    - "GRAH!"
    - "You!"

    Challenge
    - "You can’t kill me!"
    - "Come on!"

    Aggression
    - "I’m coming for you!"
    - "Trying to escape?"

    Grudge (Ultimate)
    - "I’m taking you with me!" (enemy/self)
    - "NNNAAAAGH!" (death)
    - "This is my birthright!" (friendly)

    Item Purchased
    - "Human garbage."

    [Status Related]

    Attempting to Use Ability on Cooldown
    - "I wish them dead, too."
    - "Not yet!"

    Taking Damage
    - "Yes! Pain!"
    - "You’re next!"

    Death
    - "Evil never dies..."
    - "Damn you all..."

    [Kills]

    First Blood
    - "Blood! Bring me blood!"

    Kill Streak
    - "Is that it? That’s all you can muster?"
    - "You will know true agony!"
    - "Insignificant insects!"

    [Objective]

    Capturing a Point
    - "Not yet! I’m not done with you yet!"
    - "Ants! Fleas! Mongrels!"

    Enemy Capturing a Point
    - "How are you all so useless!?!"

    [Match End]

    Top -
    - "Carnage! Despair! The Realm will know them both!"
    - "You are nothing before me! You are dust, trodden underfoot!"

    Victory
    - "This destruction... is barely the start!"
    - "RROOOOOAAAAH!"

    Defeat
    - "I will crush you! I WILL CRUSH YOU!"
    - "AH! RAGH! NYAGH! RAAAAAAAAH!"

    [Miscellaneous]

    Taunt
    - "I will wipe you off the face of the land, along with your pitiful civilization!"
    - "Nothing will keep you from me. Not walls. Not distance. Not armies. Even if you ran into the Abyss I would follow!"
    - "Kneel. Beg. Pray. Do whatever you want to accept your death."

    Jokes
    - "No joke will bring me more joy than seeing you on your knees, begging for your meaningless life, as your soul falls to the Abyss, as the light fades from your eyes, as the sounds of agony escape your lips, as your loved ones look on in horror and your entrails are scattered about the ground!"

    Laughs
    - "Bwahahahhah!"
    - "Hmmm huh huh huh huh..."
    - "Hah!"

    Match Start
    - "Morgrur showed me the truth. You are ants, to be crushed!"

    Idling
    - "I... can’t resist this urge to kill!"
    - "What are you waiting for!"

    [Main Lobby]

    Unlocking Champion
    - "Let them know. Their end approaches."

    Unlocking Cards
    - "Are you not intimidated enough?"
    - "I have no time for such petty trinkets."

    [Positioning/Awareness]

    Enemies Behind
    - "Watch your back!"
    - "Too scared to face me?"

    Enemies Above
    - "Get down here!"
    - "They’re out of reach, the cowards."

    Sniper
    - "Sniper!"
    - "Go kill the sniper already!"

    Need Healing
    - "This is nothing compared to what I’ll do to you."
    - "Healer! Now!"

    Respawn
    - "The Abyss cannot contain me."
    - "The Realm is never safe."

    [VGS]

    VA - Attack
    1 - "Attack the Left!"
    2 - "Attack the Middle!"
    3 - "Attack the Right!"
    A - "Attack!"
    E - "Push the Payload!"
    G - "Capture the Objective!"

    VB - Enemy
    1 - "Enemies on the left flank!"
    2 - "Enemies up the middle!"
    3 - "Enemies on the right flank!"
    B - "Enemies have returned to base!"
    E - "Enemies behind us!"
    G - "Enemies on the point!"
    I - "Enemies Incoming!"
    S - "Enemy spotted!"

    VC - Careful
    1 - "Be careful left Flank!"
    2 - "Be careful middle!"
    3 - "Be careful right Flank!"
    B - "Return to base!"
    C - "Be careful!"

    VD - Defend
    1 - "Defend the Left!"
    2 - "Defend the Middle!"
    3 - "Defend the Right!"
    D - "Defend!"
    E - "Defend the Payload!"
    G - "Defend the Objective!"

    VE - Emote
    A - "Brutal!"
    G - "Look upon your end!"
    R - "I won’t kill you yet."
    W - "RAHR!"

    VH - Help
    1 - "Help the left!"
    2 - "Help the middle!"
    3 - "Help the right!"
    H - "Help!"
    S - "Heal me! Now!"

    VR - Retreat
    R - "Retreat!"
    S - "Save yourself!"

    VS - Self
    O - "I'll deal with this."
    R - "Falling back!"

    VSA - Attack
    1 - "I'll attack the left!"
    2 - "I'll attack the middle!"
    3 - "I'll attack the right!"
    A - "I'll attack!"
    B - "I'll attack the Base!"
    E - "I'll push the Payload!"
    G - "I'll capture the Objective!"

    VSD - Defend
    1 - "I'll defend the left!"
    2 - "I'll defend the middle!"
    3 - "I'll defend the right!"
    B - "I'll defend the Base!"
    D - "I'll defend!"
    E - "I'll defend the Payload!"
    G - "I'll defend the Objective!"

    VV - Other
    A - "Hmph."
    B - "I'll be right back."
    C - "Cone."
    K - "Don’t die while I'm gone."
    N - "No!"
    P - "Do it."
    S - "I will never apologize!"
    T - "You did something."
    W - "Wait!
    X - "To the Abyss with that!"
    Y - "Yes!"

    VVG - General
    B - "Get out."
    F - "Slaughter!"
    G - "Destruction!"
    H - "Don’t try me."
    L - "Break them!"
    N - "You’re not worthless."
    O - "Rrgh..."
    Q - "Shut up!"
    R - "It’s fine."
    S - "Damn!"
    T - "Too bad for you."
    W - "Save yourself next time."

    VVV - Position
    A - "Set up an ambush here!"
    B - "Behind us!"
    C - "Run them down!"
    D - "Ultimate is down!"
    E - "On my way!"
    F - "Follow me!"
    G - "Group up!"
    R - "I... hate... you...!"
    S - "Stay here!"
    T - "It's a trap!"
    X - "Spread out!"
    Last edited by PWNDdotcom; 12-03-2018 at 03:35 PM.
    Thank you for not ruining the main part of Terminus. If this is how balancing is going to go, with specifically targeting the main complaints within PTS, I'm excited for what the future holds.

    #TakeOffKogasShirt

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    I've updated Haemon to fit with the design of Season 2, no built in Reveals, Cauterize or Wrecker, and only 3 Talents.
    Thank you for not ruining the main part of Terminus. If this is how balancing is going to go, with specifically targeting the main complaints within PTS, I'm excited for what the future holds.

    #TakeOffKogasShirt

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    I see this guy and all I can think of is how fast he would die. If this guy tried to take point, he would get melted soooo fast. Maybe add a true lifesteal mechanic? Not too high though. I also really like "Deal with the Devil" in concept but it's pretty bad. Overall cool design but kinda weak I think.
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    Quote Originally Posted by PWNDdotcom View Post
    I've updated Haemon to fit with the design of Season 2, no built in Reveals, Cauterize or Wrecker, and only 3 Talents.
    I was halfway through updating all of my old concepts to the current system when they announced the changes. I'm salty lol.
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    Quote Originally Posted by CrazyLasagna View Post
    I see this guy and all I can think of is how fast he would die. If this guy tried to take point, he would get melted soooo fast. Maybe add a true lifesteal mechanic? Not too high though. I also really like "Deal with the Devil" in concept but it's pretty bad. Overall cool design but kinda weak I think.
    I really don't think he'd die any faster than any other Front Line, especially not ones like Torvald or Ruckus.
    Thank you for not ruining the main part of Terminus. If this is how balancing is going to go, with specifically targeting the main complaints within PTS, I'm excited for what the future holds.

    #TakeOffKogasShirt

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    Quote Originally Posted by PWNDdotcom View Post
    I really don't think he'd die any faster than any other Front Line, especially not ones like Torvald or Ruckus.
    Both do have pocket shields, but I see your point. At the same time, both are considered weak champions. Coincidence?
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    Quote Originally Posted by CrazyLasagna View Post
    At the same time, both are considered weak champions.
    Oh yeah, I forgot about them both being weak. That's why Torvald was banned so much in the PWC, and why Ruckus was used in pretty much every game of the Finals.
    Thank you for not ruining the main part of Terminus. If this is how balancing is going to go, with specifically targeting the main complaints within PTS, I'm excited for what the future holds.

    #TakeOffKogasShirt

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    Quote Originally Posted by PWNDdotcom View Post
    Oh yeah, I forgot about them both being weak. That's why Torvald was banned so much in the PWC, and why Ruckus was used in pretty much every game of the Finals.
    Because the pro scene accurately affects the state of the rest of the game. Yep. Totally. 100%.
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