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Thread: (Hero Concept) Lan the Cheery Brawler (Support)

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    (Hero Concept) Lan the Cheery Brawler (Support)

    This has been an Idea I've been stewing over for a while.

    Lan is a defensive support that wields powerful energy gauntlets that can be used to attack directly or create an energy staff for mid-ranged fights. She does relatively low damage but bounces around the battlefield buffing allies and herself. Her ult is called Iris Ki because Irises symbolize hope, friendship, and valor, so this is meant to show that Lan will put all her energy into promoting these precepts throughout the realm.
    Lan is Kinessa's half sister of European (possibly french) descent

    Lan


    Type: Support
    Title: The Cheery Brawler
    Health: 2200
    Weapon: Energy gauntlets and Staff
    Move Speed 380
    Skills



    Zen(Passive):

    Every 15 seconds Lan generates an energy field around herself which gives allies 10% damage reduction for 10 secs or as long as they remain in the field.

    Staff Swipe/Gauntlet Rush (left click)
    Lan does a slow series of lunging attacks (every 1.5 secs) dealing damage with the weapon she has equipped. Gauntlet rush gets .5 secs faster with each hit while staff swipe is ranged deals 200 damage with 8 ammo. Pressing the reload button equips the gauntlets and causes Lan to do a short cc immune backstep from the direction she is facing.

    Power Field/Adrenaline Rush (Right Click) 12 secs/10 secs

    If Lan's Staff is equipped, she lunges then smashes the ground applying a short 0.5 sec knock up to enemies in a small frontal cone and creating an energy field which heals allies for 300 health per second(6 secs) and grants her 5% dmg reduction (during casting). If Lan is using her gauntlets, she throws a volley of energy towards a nearby teammate. Doing this increases their movement speed by 10% (for 5 secs) and heals for a burst of 1500 health.The movement speed buff ends if the affected player(s) attack.

    Acrobatics/Pole Vault (F) 12 sec

    If her gauntlets are equipped, Lan does a series of 3 short hops that can deal 200 dmg and can be done off walls or heroes knocking them back. If Lan's staff is equipped, she uses her staff to vault away in the direction she is facing. (goes on cooldown when either skill is used up)

    Mode Change (Q) 15 secs

    Lan transfer energy to maintain either her gauntlets or energy staff, cleansing herself of CCs and healing allies in range for 800 (range is similar to grover's efflorence)

    Iris Ki(E)
    Lan slams her gauntlets together channeling for 3s before changing the energy output on her gauntlets into overdrive mode refreshing all her cooldowns, restoring her health by 50% and creating a field refreshing ally skill cooldowns for 4s and restoring shield health by 1000 per sec.
    Legends

    Calisthenics
    Acrobatics is lowered to 2 hops with greater knockback, and Lan now does a kick at the end of pole vault stunning and applying knockback. The cooldown of Acrobatics and mode change are lowered by 30%.

    Tuned to Perfection
    The range of power field is increased, and adrenalin rush now affects all allies in range but heals for 10% less. Hits with either skill lowers her cooldowns by 1s.

    Empowered Mantra
    The Charge rate of her ultimate is increased by 20%, she is immune during casting and activating her ult causes allies to gain 20% of their ult charge. Her ult no longers lowers ally skill cooldowns.

    Serenity
    Zen's range is increased by 100% and its cooldown is reduced to 10 seconds, but the cooldown on Lan's skills are increased by 1. Zen now affects Lan as well.

    Lore:

    Following the half-sister, she idolized Lan joined the Sentinels as the youngest ever recruit. Despite her high aptitude as a soldier being the younger sister of a sniping prodigy like Kinessa was tough. Showing no prowess with a rifle, she donned 2 prototype crystal energy gauntlets and proved her worth. When her sister and her shotgun-toting master left the sentinels Lan didn't become a bounty hunter like her sister, but instead, decided to work to promote peace on either side of the ensuing war of the realm.


    This is a concept I thought of, and I'm looking for suggestions from anyone on how to make it better. I'm not that good when it comes to games and the numbers behind them.
    Last edited by FarceDawn; 02-04-2019 at 01:52 PM. Reason: I noticed a lot of things off with some of the numbers and effects since I last wrote this.

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    The Passive is cool and thematic, but the idea of cauterizing allies is a little too clunky. I'm sure you can work your way around that. The LMB switch is a pretty generic mechanic, but I like the extra flair you put in the Q, so to me it's a pass. The Ultimate is decent, but I don't think its name thematically fits the eastern brawler kind of character. Something like Lotus Mantra would be a better name. Also, can you activate the Ultimate when you have the staff equipped?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Harlequin98 View Post
    The Passive is cool and thematic, but the idea of cauterizing allies is a little too clunky. I'm sure you can work your way around that. The LMB switch is a pretty generic mechanic, but I like the extra flair you put in the Q, so to me it's a pass. The Ultimate is decent, but I don't think its name thematically fits the eastern brawler kind of character. Something like Lotus Mantra would be a better name. Also, can you activate the Ultimate when you have the staff equipped?
    Thank you so much for the reply I changed a few of the mechanics on her passive as well as the name of her ultimate. I also changed what her lmb does when reloading. I also added a possible legend for her which I forgot to put in before called Serenity. I hope you tell me what you think!
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    Quote Originally Posted by FarceDawn View Post
    Thank you so much for the reply I changed a few of the mechanics on her passive as well as the name of her ultimate. I also changed what her lmb does when reloading. I also added a possible legend for her which I forgot to put in before called Serenity. I hope you tell me what you think!
    Nice changes. Serenity is a great idea, and I personally think it should be one of the four talents instead of just an optional idea. Also, for the Passive, a 20% damage reduction seems kind of high. I think 10% would be appropriate.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Harlequin98 View Post
    Nice changes. Serenity is a great idea, and I personally think it should be one of the four talents instead of just an optional idea. Also, for the Passive, a 20% damage reduction seems kind of high. I think 10% would be appropriate.
    Again thanks for the advice my concept looks much better now in my opinion as well. I was also wondering if you can check out her healing skills cause I'm trying to make those sound balanced.
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