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    Champion Concept - Neil / Flank

    Neil, member of the Thousand Hands guild has shown his worth and loyalty on many stages. His skill with shurikens has given is renown in the whole realm. In once of his more hard fights Neil, after defeating his enemy, got a powerful bracelet that grants him of magnetic power which he uses to control his ninja stars. Rumors say that even Lian is interested on his skills, or maybe she just wants his bracelet.


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    Name: Neil - Lian's boyfriend
    Health: 1800
    Role: Flank



    Primary Fire - Shurikens: Neil Throws a shuriken every 0.75s dealing 700 dmg. Neil can hold for up to 1.25s to CRACK his shuriken by using his bracelet's power.

    -1.5s reload time. 6 ammo.
    - The shurikens stay nailed in the location they land for 8s. When Neil steps on a shuriken he grabs it up to gain 1 ammo.
    - When Neil reloads, he uses his bracelet to return all his shurikens back dealing 75 dmg each to enemies in their way. If they hit an wall while returning, they get destroyed.
    - If shurikens land on an enemy or a wall, they drop to the ground within 3s.

    - CRACKED shurikens bounce once and split into 3 pieces if they hit a wall or ground, dealing 400 dmg each. Those pieces last for 3s and they can be returned after reloading.


    Passive:
    -Neil can step on a shuriken/s nailed on a wall to be able to nail climbing, he can use multiple shurikens to increase the distance. He uses his knife as support, being able to stay on the wall for a short time.
    Alt-fire - Magnetic Knife: Neil throw a magnetic knife that attract any shuriken or piece of shuriken within 50ft of its trajectory dealing 75dmg each. Magnetic Knife deals 700 dmg, pierce enemies and it returns like a shuriken as well.
    14s CD


    1st Ability - Body Replacement: Neil uses his bracelet for 1.5s to absorb up to 2500 damage. If at the end of this ability you have absorbed between 500 and 2499 damage, you can swap place with one of your nearby shurikens.
    15s CD


    2nd Ability - Static Field: Dash a short distance and expand energy from your body that increases your movement speed by 100% but it decreases over time. Within the next 3s if any nearby enemy uses a movement ability you can reactivate this ability to be pushed a short distance in the direction of that enemy.
    8s CD


    Ultimate Ability - Rain of Stars: Throw a knife that after 1s attracks you (using your bracelet). Then you throw 30 shurikens within 1.5s that deal 75dmg each and nail in the ground for 3s. If you get a kill, you can throw 5 more skurikens.


    Legendary Cards:
    1- You can activate your ultimate at 60%, but you will throw only 5 shurikens and get 10 shurikens when getting a kill.

    2- Activating Body Replacement removes CC (also gain cc inmunity). Also, the shuriken becomes cracked, bounces and splits into 3 pieces when it drops to the ground, dealing 400dmg to enemies near the location where Neil was.
    - 120° distance between each.

    3- Now you throw 2 shurikens instead. They deal 400 damage each. They split into 2 piece each other if they are cracked.

    4- Gain 25% damage reduction for 1s when reloading. Also gain up to 30% damage reduction base on the streak of enemy (6% each).

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    Eh, seems a bit too similar to Maeve due to them sharing primary weapons. maybe some of his primary weapon concepts could be incorporated, such as being able to pick up your knives, but I'd give this character his own weapon to make him stand out better, such as maybe repkacing his knives with shurikens.
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    Quote Originally Posted by RonaId View Post
    Neil has a bracelet that grants him of magnetic power which he uses to control his knives/daggers/kunai/Ninja Stars.
    I really haven't decided what type of weapon he could throw. But Ninja Stars or shurikens are ok. thanks.

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    I had a similar champion idea where he wields a spear as his main weapon, and he has the ability to throw it. the similarity is that he can call back the spear to him, and can also deal damage on the way back

    another is that he also throws tiny weapons
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    Quote Originally Posted by IamRick1996 View Post
    I had a similar champion idea
    That's because this mechanic is interesting.

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    So, let me ask you one thing about this concept of yours, Neil...


    ...is he Young?

    *runs*
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    Quote Originally Posted by Wallachia View Post
    So, let me ask you one thing about this concept of yours, Neil...


    ...is he Young?

    *runs*
    I only know that Lian does not stop saying his name

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    Pretty good concept. Ninja-esque characters tend to be boring in general, but this seems just fine. I did find some issues, however. First, the reloading seems quite awkward. I really like the idea of recollecting the shurikens, but I think the damage they deal is too inconsistent for any use, especially when Neil is a flank and would most likely be repositioning himself frequently. My personal suggestion is to change them so that they are able to travel through walls so that a 100% recall rate is guaranteed, and they should deal at least 100 damage as well. Also, I'm not sure if I like the F, which seems very uninteresting compared to other abilities.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Harlequin98 View Post
    My personal suggestion is to change them so that they are able to travel through walls so that a 100% recall rate is guaranteed, and they should deal at least 100 damage as well. Also, I'm not sure if I like the F, which seems very uninteresting compared to other abilities.
    Thank for taking your time and reply.

    You are right about he F ability. I have completely reworked.
    Now I notice that 50dmg is too low. I have increased its damage from 50 to 75. I think 75 is ok because his RMB and ult will deal to much damage.
    I think that if the shuriken could pass through walls that will be frustrating. But instead I will let them pass through enemies.
    He can also use this as a Seris Q.

    I made a cap in body replacement's shield because Neil, as a flank, is a solo fighter (1v1).

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    Quote Originally Posted by RonaId View Post
    Fine, we have Koga, now lets have Neil.
    I really hope you're not serious
    I make champion concepts. sue me.

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