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    Champion Concept - Neil / Flank

    Neil, member of the Thousand Hands guild has shown his worth and loyalty on many stages. His skill with shurikens has given is renown in the whole realm. In once of his more hard fights Neil, after defeating his enemy, got a powerful knife that grants him of magnetic power which he uses to control his ninja stars.

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    Name: Neil - The yellow flash
    Health: 1800
    Role: Flank


    Primary Fire - Shurikens: Neil Throws a shuriken every 0.75s dealing 700 dmg. Neil can hold for up to 1.5s to CRACK his shuriken by using his knife's power.

    -1.5s reload time. 6 ammo.
    - The shurikens stay nailed in the location they land for 8s. When Neil steps on a shuriken he picks it up gain 1 ammo, and he gain 30s speed for 1s.
    - When Neil reloads, he uses his knife to return all his shurikens back dealing 100 dmg each one to enemies in their way. If they hit an wall while returning, they get destroyed.
    - If shurikens land on an enemy or a wall, they drop to the ground within 3s.

    - CRACKED shurikens bounce once and split into 3 pieces if they hit a wall or ground, dealing 400 dmg each. Those pieces last for 3s and they can be returned after reloading.


    Passive:
    -Neil can step on a shuriken/s nailed on a wall to be able to nail climbing, he can use multiple shurikens to increase the distance. He uses his knife as support, being able to stay on the wall for a short time.
    Alt-fire - Magnetic Knife: Neil throw a magnetic knife that attracts any shuriken or piece of shuriken within 50ft of its trajectory dealing 100dmg each. Magnetic Knife deals 500 dmg and it pierces enemies.
    14s CD


    1st Ability - Body Replacement: Neil can absorb up to 2500 damage during 1.5s. If at the end of this ability you have absorbed less than 2500 damage, you can swap place with one of your shurikens within a 50ft range.
    15s CD


    2nd Ability - Static Field: Expand energy arround Neil that increases his movement speed by 70% but it decreases over time. During the next 3s, if a nearby enemy would use a movement ability, that enemy will be 70% slowed instead, then you can reactivate this ability for being pushed in direction of that enemy and deal 400 melee damage using your knife.
    10s CD


    Ultimate Ability - Flash: Throw your knife dealing 500 dmg. After 1s you will be attracted to it and your next attack will shoot 2 shurikens. If you get a kill your ultimate could be reactivated in the next 5s.


    Legendary Cards:

    Surprise Gift: Activating Body Replacement removes CC (and gain cc inmunity). Also, the shuriken becomes cracked, bounces and splits into 3 pieces when it drops to the ground, dealing 800dmg to enemies near the location where Neil was.
    - 120° between each.

    Rapid fire: Now you throw 2 shurikens instead. They deal 400 damage each. They split into 2 piece each other if they were cracked.

    Repulsion:Picking up a churiken reduce the CD for all your abilities for 1s and also you get 40% movement speed for 1s. If an enemy step on a shuriken, he will be damage for 200.
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    Eh, seems a bit too similar to Maeve due to them sharing primary weapons. maybe some of his primary weapon concepts could be incorporated, such as being able to pick up your knives, but I'd give this character his own weapon to make him stand out better, such as maybe repkacing his knives with shurikens.
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    Quote Originally Posted by RonaId View Post
    Neil has a bracelet that grants him of magnetic power which he uses to control his knives/daggers/kunai/Ninja Stars.
    I really haven't decided what type of weapon he could throw. But Ninja Stars or shurikens are ok. thanks.
    Last edited by RonaId; 12-29-2017 at 12:57 AM.

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    I had a similar champion idea where he wields a spear as his main weapon, and he has the ability to throw it. the similarity is that he can call back the spear to him, and can also deal damage on the way back

    another is that he also throws tiny weapons
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    Quote Originally Posted by IamRick1996 View Post
    I had a similar champion idea
    That's because this mechanic is interesting.

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    So, let me ask you one thing about this concept of yours, Neil...


    ...is he Young?

    *runs*
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    Quote Originally Posted by Wallachia View Post
    So, let me ask you one thing about this concept of yours, Neil...


    ...is he Young?

    *runs*
    I only know that Lian does not stop saying his name
    Last edited by RonaId; 04-08-2018 at 10:02 AM.

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    Pretty good concept. Ninja-esque characters tend to be boring in general, but this seems just fine. I did find some issues, however. First, the reloading seems quite awkward. I really like the idea of recollecting the shurikens, but I think the damage they deal is too inconsistent for any use, especially when Neil is a flank and would most likely be repositioning himself frequently. My personal suggestion is to change them so that they are able to travel through walls so that a 100% recall rate is guaranteed, and they should deal at least 100 damage as well. Also, I'm not sure if I like the F, which seems very uninteresting compared to other abilities.
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    Quote Originally Posted by RonaId View Post
    Fine, we have Koga, now lets have Neil.
    I really hope you're not serious
    I make champion concepts. sue me.

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