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    Dimitri, The Cyclops

    NAME: DIMITRI
    RACE: Cyclops
    CLASS: FRONT LINE
    PROFESSION: HORDE CHIEF
    HEALTH POOL: 4000
    SPEED: Medium

    Playstyle Features:
    Heavy area holder and suppressor. Hit scan Chain Gunner, single target skill shot Harpoon providing a hefty Single Target CC slow, a small Deployable unit projecting a Bubble Shield for cover, Grapple hook and pull across the ground Mobility. As a Character this guy is a mix of grover, rukus, makoa and barik style traits and tactics.




    Concept:
    Most of his kit is based around his dwarven chain gun outside of his sheer endurance as a cyclops. I feel like the game lacks a big 'heavy' chaingun guy in the Front Line class.

    His Harpoon is a prospective punishing tool designed to drastically punish an out of position champion or halt a foes retreat when they are in need of healing, keeping a foe in your field of suppression. Talent for cripples and lower CD.

    Your deployable bubble shield beacon is a wonderful combo tool with your weapon to provide a large area of cover while dishing out suppression damage, however it is lacklustre when compared to other dome shields as it requires the centre beacon to be kept safe from harm. That said you can have a talent that allows you to fire your shield at a location.

    Your Ult is a Cyclops keystone ability, FIRE A LASER FROM MY ONE EYE. Nuff said, fits right into roll and race of character. A frontline that will get deadly by just walking into the fray and absorbing fire, forcing foes to back up as he gears a kill shot to tactfully exile any impending threat to his process that combos into your harpoon or winch.

    ABILITIES

    LMB = CHAINGUN
    "A bulky metal tri-barrelled mounted machine gun too cumbersome for a mortal man to carry, ripped from its mount, it is a storm of heated metal ready to unleash a blizzard."
    - Fire a hit scan Bullet from your chain gun dealing 80 every 0.16s scaling to 0.08s over 1.5 seconds.
    - Reloading will require your to rev up again.
    - Weapon has medium random spread.
    - Barrels will keep spinning for 1s after halting fire, allowing for movement between fire.
    - Bullets are medium to long range with strong falloff at long range.
    - Movement speed is impeded by 25% while firing.

    Magazine - 120
    Reload - 1.5s

    RMB = HARPOON
    "An offensive Harpoon and Tether."
    - Fire a Projectile Harpoon at an opponent that deals 400 damage on contact.
    - On contact a line of sight Chain Link tether is formed between you and target.
    - Chain Link lasts for 2s.
    - Chain Link is a CC effect that applies a 30% slow for as long as the tether is established.
    - Tether can be removed earlier by either you or your target moving behind hard terrain or out of range.
    - When the tether is removed prematurely from target, target receives a 15% slow for 1.5s
    - Has a range of 100 units.

    CD - 8s

    Q (Defensive) = SHIELD BEACON
    "Drop a beacon deployable that emits a bubble shield of cover that holds back damage."
    - Create a 1200 Hp Deployable shield generator that emits a 6000 HP Bubble Shield at your feet.
    - Enemies inside the Bubble are slowed by 10%
    - If beacon deployable is destroyed the shield and slow effects leave.
    - Cooldown activates when destroyed.
    - Can be placed on the Payload.

    CD - 14

    F (Mobility) = MOORING ANCHOR / WINCH
    "Fire a Hook with a safety cable to attach to a surface, the activate it again to pull yourself out of the fray, or to seal off prey unhindered."
    - This projectile has a range of 70 units.
    - Fire an Anchor that travels though foes, shields and only collides with terrain.
    - On impact the Harpoon secures to terrain after 1s with a line of sight tether between you and you mooring anchor.
    - After the delay pressing F again will active a Winch on the gun. Locking you out of actions. But quickly pulling you along your tether across the floor toward your Mooring Anchor.
    - Each foe you body slam along your way is dealt 200 damage and is knocked aside.
    - Pressing F again will cancel the pull and destroy the Anchor.
    - Breaking line of sight with the Moored anchor will destroy it resulting in a 5s cooldown.

    CD - 12s
    If missed - 5s

    E (Ult) = AMASS RAGE
    "Roar with fury, gaining endurance to fight on for as long as his rage is channelled. while charging up a mighty death laser from his eye to slay all who cannot withstand it's power."
    - Instantaneously restore half your missing HP.
    - For 8s you gain 50% Damage resistance.
    - For 8s Gain 20% Increased Healing from Allies
    - Over the next 7s you begin to charge up a kill shot called Hate Ray.
    - Pressing E again, and cancelling the Ult, will to trigger cause the Hate Ray to fire with its current amassed damage.
    - The Hate Ray deals 1200 base true damage + the total damage negated by the Amass Rage damage reduction.
    - A visual cue is added to the eye depending on amount of Damage absorbed by Amass Rage, allowing players to see the power of that shit before making a decision to hang around.
    - This Ray Pierces foes and shields but is negated by terrain and walls.
    - If the Ult Ends without the Ray being fired Restore your HP equal to the damage sustained from Amass Rage's Damage Resistance.

    Hostile ULT Sound: AN EYE FOR AN EYE!!!
    Allied ULT Sound: I WILL TAKE YOU ALL ON, HA HA HA

    TALENTS

    SKYHUNTER
    - Harpoon now has 2 charges and cripples for 2s.
    Tactful use of Cripples and medium to high dps is a threat to champs with better then average escape abilities.

    BEHEMOTH
    - Increase Ult charge by %15
    - Restore 2/3rds of your Missing Hp
    - While in ult, gain up to 50% / 80% damage resistance for 8s based on your missing hp.
    FL's need a card to say I am my own god damn support. By restore yourself up to high hp and getting +50% damage resistance, you become an enduring titan to bring down for a short amount of time.

    BUBBLE MORTARS
    - Shield Beacon now be deployed from a distance of 50 units.
    Shoot the shield at the ground near your team member or on your foe, ether way the foe will have trouble hitting their target.

    BOUND IN CHAINS
    Harpoon now spreads between nearby enemies applying slow to multiple targets.
    Holds groups together until they break chain or it expires.

    LOADOUT CARDS

    ARMOR

    Titan
    Increase Maximum Health by 120/240/360/480/600

    Heavy Weight
    Reduce the Duration of CC and slows by %12/%24/%36/%48/%60

    Fuelled by Massacre
    Eliminations Reduce active cooldowns by %10/%20/%30/%40/%50

    Fuel my Rage
    Heal for 100/200/300/400/500 per second for 4s after falling below 20%.
    CD 10s

    HARPOON

    Stock Up
    Reduce cooldown of Harpoon by 0.6s/1.2s/1.8s/2.4s/3s

    Pin to the Ground
    Increase the slow of Harpoon by %5/%10/%15/%20/%25

    Chase The Enemy
    Increase your speed by %10/%20/%30/%40/%50 for 3s after Hitting an opponent with Harpoon.

    Grind Away
    Reduce the Cooldown of Mooring Anchor by 1s/2s/3s/4s/5s after hitting a Harpoon.

    SHIELD BEACON

    Fortress of Solitude
    Standing inside Shield Beacon heals you for 80/160/240/320/400 Health Per Second.

    Salvage
    Reduce the cooldown of Shield Beacon by 1s/2s/3s/4s/5s when Bubble Shield is Destroyed.

    Mend the Wall
    Shield Beacon Deployable has 125/250/375/500/625 more Hit points.

    Come and Get Me
    Enemies inside of Bubble Shield are slowed by %8/%16/%24/%32/%40

    MOORING ANCHOR

    Fallback Chain
    Reduce the CD of missing or breaking your Mooring Anchor Chain by 1s/2s/3s/4s/5s

    Chain Mail
    While Mooring Anchor is active you gain, %4/%8/%12/%16/%20 Damage resistance

    Mending Chain
    The cooldown your Mooring Anchor is Reduced by 1s/2s/3s/4s/5s

    Chain Raid
    Increase the Speed Winch pulls you toward your anchor by %10/%20/%30/%40/%50.


    Biography:
    "So you want to know about Dimitri? What should I tell you, he was a chief of the Cyclops. He was the king of a race of the fiercest creatures I've ever laid eyes on." Barik

    A heavyweight fighter for the Resistance, he may not be smart or clever, but methodical brutality and tenacity gets the job done. Once a peacekeeper of the mountains and the wealth beneath them, now a crestfallen lunatic plagued by is failure to stop the slaughter of his people, imprisoned and stripped of all pride by his enemy, his dreams haunted by the mangled corpses of his kin, nothing more now then a half mad beast driven to the brink of sanity... YET STILL HE WONT DIE

    It is hard to grasp why such a creature can be so merciless, butchering his foes with a twisted passion, ripping skulls from their spines, snapping limbs, something about the way he smiles and laughs like a bloodthirsty maniac as legions of trained soldiers are mowed down by his new toy of destruction makes him seem like a big misunderstood child. But to those who know loss, it is clear that this brute has lost everything and he will fight until his body can take no more, he will keep kicking and screaming until he or his foes lay battered and broken.

    Once upon a time, the Cyclops were a tall, proud and peaceful race who lived in harmony with the barren mountainous land they called home. Although they saw themselves as hermit folk, the Cyclops were seen as the protectors of many of the smaller races that inhabited the mountains, keeping them safe from the tyrannical creatures of the land; the Dragons who reduced their towns to cinders, Trolls who saw the little folk as prey, and when asked, the Magistrate from acts of injustice.

    Despite local folklore, the Cyclops were not an unintelligent race, they were a spiritual people whose inherit power derived from Crystals. However unlike the technology of the Elves, Goblins or Dwarves, the Cyclops bodies were natural amplifiers for Crystal power, channelling their energy into magic power that rivalled the most formidable crystal weapon technologies.

    The knowledge the world obtained from crystal power caused much fear in the courts of the Magistrate, how could they control peace and the tide of power across the land if these creatures could so easily harness destructive energy as a means to use against them. Fearing the potential harm of crystal technologies, the Magistrate soon issued a Royal Decree for the control of crystals across the land. Treating the trade of crystals as an illegal operation and granting a reward to those willing to turn in their precious stones or any information to anyone harbouring them.

    This caused great unrest amongst the folk of the world outside to walls of the Magistrate. For they fear that the Magistrate will turn their sacred stones in to technologies to ever further the pursuit of control through war. Rather then seeing their crystals turned into weapons made the make peace, many folk journeyed to the lands of the cyclops to donate their crystals in tribute to the race who have stood by them countless times against overwhelming adversaries, showing nothing but glee as they disregard self preservation in the pursuit to protect the feeble creatures of this world.

    Now the cyclops don't know much, but they know distress, they know fear, they can see it beneath the skin, they can see it in the heart and soul. When the whole land is in distress, the Cyclops did what they always do, they accepted the plea of help. The Chief sheltered the crystals and their power from the Magistrate for he agreed that the peace they spoke was nothing more than having biggest cudgel to beat peace into others.

    However honest their intentions, the tribute of crystals to the Cyclops scared the Magistrate, with rumours of the Resistance on the rise and a direct flow of power to a race of beastfolk who can level towns with a worthy enough stone, the Magistrate court deliberated for days how to go about this scenario. Their solution, a simple worded letter, a request for the Cyclops to surrender their crystals to maintain peace across the realm.

    The Chieftain scoffed at this decree, sending a letter back in return. A neatly composed scroll of well worded ramblings speaking of the fear in the hearts of the feeble folk, a shadow the kingdom cast over the land shrouding the hopes of it's subjects. In short he refused, standing his ground, proclaiming if the Magistrate wants crystals then they need to earn them, they need to earn their peace.

    But despite the chieftains neutral stance, "No" is not something you say to the Magistrate. Within a day forces were assembled, equipped and trained with weapons of crystal magic the world had not seen its like before. By the time the Cyclops heard, it was too late. If it was a war, it'd be remembered like the second scourge... But this was not a war... this was slaughter... no one believing history the triumphant victors claim was justified.

    The Cyclops put up whatever resistance they could, they tore down mountains to show their rage, they made the Earth tremble with their fury, they held their ground to the bitter end. The chieftain himself tore through legion after legion of soldiers, an unstoppable brute some would say... But even the most ferocious beasts of legend paled against numbers of the magistrate, the efficiency of their weapons and brutality of their tactics. In the end the creatures who fought tooth and claw for their feeble friends, died feeble and scared, with their back against the wall. With the strongest of them all the Cheif shackled, chained and forced to watch every minute of it. "This is what he did," "He killed everyone," he was told over and over... He kicked and spat rage at every word, every wound they inflicted on his kin, every time they stopped breathing, he screamed.

    They honoured him with the name 'The Last Great Cyclops' as an insult and imprisoned him as main attraction of the Royal Zoo. The beast raged for months, tearing through its cages to only be beaten into submission and forced into a smaller one with bigger bars. It took time but the Magistrate finally made the Cyclops succumb, he stopped fighting, he just sat there, a docile creature, no longer a threat, they had mad him their pet.

    It broke him. To those who remember the jolly gentle giant only saw a shadow of his former soul, a shattered heart with nothing but hatred and pain coursing through his veins. But in his torment he learnt something new, patience. He would listen everyday for a way out of this prison. And with talk of the resistance on the rise... He understood his purpose with newfound clarity. He was engine that would tear down these castle towers, he was the instrument that would crush every bone, brake every body and rend every corpse to bloody mangled mess...

    Quotable Voice Lines:

    Enters Battle
    "SAY MY NAME, DIMITRI, WITH THREE Is"
    "I AM DIMITRI, TIS FU&$%NG GOOD TO MEET ME."
    "I do like to fool around, BUT THIS IS NOT ONE OF THOSE TIMES!"

    Kill
    "YESSS CRUSH THEM, SMASH THEM"
    Maniac laughter "HAHAHAHA"
    "THERE IS NO MERCY HERE"

    Ally Elimination
    "THERE IS NO ESCAPE"
    "RIP THEM APART HAHAHA"

    Burning
    "You think I care about this?"

    Healing
    "PAIN IS NOTHING"
    "Bleeding won't stop me from stomping on your face in"

    Death
    "Maybe I can rest now...."
    "But I'm not finished yet..."

    Other
    "I with literally DISARM YOU, starting with the fingers"
    "Come on KILL ME."
    Last edited by AyyDimitri; 08-18-2018 at 11:18 AM. Reason: I AM DIMITRI

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    This looks like a really good concept to me. I'd just like to point out two things. 1st, on the bunker you put the solid part's health as 3600k. The "k" is unnecessary there since you wrote out the number already. Not a big deal, I do it all the time. 2nd, try coming up with some legendary cards, since those usually change how abilities work and define playstyles. Other than that, great concept!

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    yeah, I overlooked that. Fixed.

    I added the Legendary and loadout cards.

    Will Probably just sit on it now, giving it some tweaks here and there.
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    Updated with Loadout cards.

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    Chainguns and Harpoons are a badass combination, but the abilities need to be more interesting, especially the F and the Ultimate.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Harlequin98 View Post
    Chainguns and Harpoons are a badass combination, but the abilities need to be more interesting, especially the F and the Ultimate.
    Meh I like the F ability Which compared to the other movement options the front lines have, what's not to love?
    I liked the idea chaingun having a lot of chains, one of them being using the same harpoon launch and pull system for mobility. Due to the nature of his semi hard terrain wall designed to punish and slow down all who use abilities that slide across the ground, I figured he would want something with the ability to get over this.

    However do agree with you about his ultimate, I dislike the ability for this champion.
    The current health regeneration ult idea and might change it to something else further on down the track when I throw a concept for a Troll or some other creature better suited to HP regeneration concepts, and I'd probably buff it a bit now that I consider that makoa and Terminus come back in a flash harder then this.

    As for now I'd like to entertain myself with possible ides for his ult but am looking for good ways to make him work.
    Upon activation he screams, silencing all in an aoe for 1.5s, for 9s his eye projects magic LASER beam of soft Control while upping his chain gun revs.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AyyDimitri View Post
    Meh I like the F ability Which compared to the other movement options the front lines have, what's not to love?
    I just found it too similar to Grover's Vine.

    Quote Originally Posted by AyyDimitri View Post
    However do agree with you about his ultimate, I dislike the ability for this champion.
    The current health regeneration ult idea and might change it to something else further on down the track when I throw a concept for a Troll or some other creature better suited to HP regeneration concepts, and I'd probably buff it a bit now that I consider that makoa and Terminus come back in a flash harder then this.

    As for now I'd like to entertain myself with possible ides for his ult but am looking for good ways to make him work.
    Upon activation he screams, silencing all in an aoe for 1.5s, for 9s his eye projects magic LASER beam of soft Control while upping his chain gun revs.
    Alright, think about it. Let me know when you're done.
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    Edited: Changed the Ult

    Health and Anti null healing sound like good tanky features, but I felt like they did not fit character theme. He is a cyclops, he may be an enduring son of a bitch but, not something that screams anti cauterise...

    Now that he has an ult he can combo with his abilities and be a threat you question to fight or flee from when that becomes active.
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    The new Ultimate looks great. I personally think it would be more interesting if there was a gimmick that will increase the damage of the laser. Maybe it can deal additional damage if a certain amount of damage was sustained with the damage resistance? Just a suggestion.
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    I think the legendary for his ultimate should be like Inara's earthen guard in that it makes you take more healing, even when you're being heavily cauterized. Otherwise it would be lackluster in comparison to the other 2, especially given how strong cripples are in this game.

    Also how would the harpoon interact with resilience?
    Grover isn't so great? Are you kidding me? When was the last time you saw a support with such high mobility and damage? Grover puts the game on another level, and we will be blessed if we ever see a champion as good as him. Jenos gets top healing. Mal Damba impacts teamfights. Grover breaks the rules. You can keep your statistics. I prefer the magic.

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