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    Tox - Junk Guardian

    Hello!
    I saw that Piggy got a big hate... i understand, childish idea, bla bla bla. But some concepts are cool, some are total sh*t. Never mind, i have new concept, that might be better in some facts. Still, in 4 Languages - English, German, Spanish and Polish, to make it understand for everyone (mostly those rage kids that are breaking their computers after losing rankeds ) Also, note that you don't need to read EVERY Language mentioned here. Just read in your language. + It was Translated in Google Translator, so sorry for possible issues <-- Mostly on German and Spanish. Let's get into it:

    [English]

    Base Info:

    Tox - Junk Guardian

    Role: Damage
    HP:2300

    Abillities

    LMB - Fish Bones - Tox uses bones of antic, bully-fish to damage his foes. Every 0,5 s he throws a bone, that deals 400 dmg.

    In his case, no bonus damage. That's sad. Well, Androxus mixed with Lian, sounds nice, yes? (or rather no, if haters of Piggy will group up)



    RMB - Waste Ball - Tox launches from his head a ball, that goes trought the realm with normal psychics. If ball will hit an enemy, it will explode, dealing 500 dmg, and throught 4 second additional 500 [8 sec. Cooldown]

    First poison abillity (of a character). What means "normal psychics". It goes down the slopes and can be effected by crowd control. It can really mess things up, cause explosion radius is really big



    Q - Corrosive Carpet - Tox summons a barrel filled with corrosive liquid, then rolls it to the battlefield, leaving a carpet of acid. Deals 90 each 0.2 sec. for 5 sec. Being contacted with barrel wil make you crippled [12 sec. Cooldown]

    Tox's biggest advantage is sometimes he don't need to be in battle to deal damage. Corrosive Carpet is one of this abillities that allows him to do it. You can also throw it from high clif to kill enemies. You can experiment



    F - Quick Warp - Tox throws a special mechanism, that clings to any surface for 60 seconds. If you'll reclick abillity, you will teleport to the mechanism place. Animation of teleportation is 2 sec. long. After 60 seconds, mechanism desappears and abillity goes on cooldown [15 sec. Cooldown]

    You can use it to trigger a complicated ways to travel. You might be in center of battle, you will begin to die, you'll use your Quick Warp, and you're safe.



    E - Gates to Junkwaste (Ultimate) - Tox leaps into the sky, to make a powerful explosion, that deals 1000 damage, knocks people away, and takes 60% of health, dealing 250 damage per second til the loss of 60% maxinum health

    As the guardian, Tox can open gates to Junkwaste everytime he wants. Opening gate deals a massive damage, and even if victim will survive an explosion, it would be more likely that it'll die by the period of some seconds.


    Legendary Cards

    Bottomless Liquid [Default] - Corrosive Carpet - Corrosive Carpet slows enemies down by 50%

    Allows Tox to escape easier, but also to deal more damage

    Spoil - Waste Ball - Waste Ball deals 25% more periodic damage 2 times faster

    Allows you to deal more damage faster.

    Curved Shapes - Weapon - Weapon now goes back to you, like a boomerang. Returning, deals 40% less damage. Ammo is infinite, shoots goes trought enemies, but shoots each 0.6 sec.

    This is intresting. Deals more damage, dont needs ammo, but shoots less often... decision belongs to you


    Normal Cards:

    Schedule

    -Eliminations reduces active cooldowns by 10/20/30/40%

    Snot

    -Increases speed by 5/10/15/20% when out of combat

    Brothel

    - 7/14/21/28% CC Resistence

    Focusing

    -Increases health by 75/150/225/300

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    Roundness

    - Increases Waste Ball's size by 20/40/60/80%

    Symmetry

    - Reduces Cooldown of Waste Ball by 0,5/1/1,5/2

    Gelatine

    - Increases Explosion size by 5/10/15/20%

    Stench

    - Staying in area of explosion will heal you by 100/200/300/400 HP

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    Timeout

    - Increases Corrosive Carpet's lenght by 5/10/15/20%

    Rot

    - Hitting enemy with barrel heals you by 20/40/60/80 HP

    Soft Surface

    - Going trought Corrosive Carpet gives 25/50/75/100% speed boost for 2 sec.

    Warning

    - Corrosive Carpet expands 10/20/30/40% faster

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    Convenience

    - Reduces cooldown of Quick Warp by 1/2/3/4 sec.

    Comfort

    - Teleporting to mechanism heals you by 100/200/300/400 HP

    Agile hands

    - 10/20/30/40% faster throw of mechanism

    Melting

    - Teleport animation is 0,25/0,5/0,75/1 sec. shorter

    Voice Lines [ONLY ENGLISH]


    VGS

    [VA1] Attack the left flank
    [VA2] Attack up the middle
    [VA3] Attack the right flank
    [VAA] Attack!
    [VAE] Push the Payload!
    [VAG] Capture the Objective

    [VB1] Enemies on the left flank
    [VB2] Enemies up the middle
    [VB3] Enemies on the right flank
    [VBB] Enemies have returned to base
    [VBE] Enemies behind us
    [VBG] Enemies on the point
    [VBI] Enemies incoming
    [VBS] Enemy Spotted

    [VC1] Be Careful, left flank
    [VC2] Be Careful, middle
    [VC3] Be Careful, right flank
    [VCB] Return do base
    [VCC] Be Careful

    [VD1] Defend left flank
    [VD2] Defend the middle
    [VD3] Defend right flank
    [VDD] Defend
    [VDE] Defend the Payload
    [VDG] Defend the Objective

    [VEA] Good
    [VEG] Im Toxic, step away
    |-I have no mood for jokes
    [VEJ|-No, just no
    |-Please... im taking serious my job
    |-Ha... ha
    [VEL|-Funny
    |-Hi hi hi...
    [VER] Can be my assistant
    |-You'll gover in gloom and doom while messing with me
    [VET|-Die, and everything would be nice
    |-I protect Junkwaste with all my blue blood i have
    [VEW] Hooray!

    [VH1] Help left Flank
    [VH2] Help the middle
    [VH3] Help right flank
    [VHH] Help!
    [VHS] Need Healing

    [VRR] Retreat!
    [VRS] Save yourself

    [VSA--|-[1]- I'll attack left flank
    |-[2]- I'll attack the middle
    |-[3]- I'll attack right flank
    |-[A]- I'll attack
    |-[B]- I'll attack the base
    |-[E]- I'll push the payload
    |-[G]- I'll capture the objective
    [VSD--|-[1]- I'll defend left flank
    |-[2]- I'll defend the middle
    |-[3]- I'll defend right flank
    |-[B]- I'll defend the base
    |-[D]- I'll defend
    |-[E]- I'll defend the payload
    |-[G]- I'll defend the objective
    [VSO] I'm on it
    [VSR] Falling back

    [VVA] Ok!
    [VVB] Be right back
    [VVC] Completed
    [VVG--|-[B]- Goodbye!
    |-[F]- Fun is Fun, Death is Death
    |-[G]- Great Game
    |-[H]- Hi!
    |-[L]- Luck may help ya
    |-[N]- Nice
    |-[O]- Did wrong, yes?
    |-[Q]- Shut Up!
    |-[R]- Don't need apologies
    |-[S]- Nooooo!
    |-[T]- Not good at all!
    |-[W]- No need to thank me!
    [VVK] I'll be back
    [VVN] No
    [VVP] Please?
    [VVS] Failed, again
    [VVT] Thanks
    [VVV--|-[A]- Set up an ambush here
    |-[B]- Behind us
    |-[C]- Chase the enemy
    |-[D]- Ultimate is down
    |-[E]- On my way!
    |-[F]- Follow my lead
    |-[G]- Group Up
    |-[R]- Ultimate is ready
    |-[S]- Stay here
    |-[T]- It's a trap
    |-[X]- Spread Out
    [VVW] Wait for me!
    [VVX] Cancel that
    [VVY] Yep


    Champion's Selection
    "Tox"

    Introduction
    "I'm Guardian, however, you're not worth guarding"
    "You should prepare, meeting me, some godlike armor, or bow maybe?"

    Mounting Up
    "Go"
    "On my way"

    Skills:

    Waste Ball:
    "Bleahch"
    "Watch out"

    Corrosive Carpet:
    "Yuo're not welcomed here"
    "You shall not pass"

    Quick Warp:
    "Returning to my position"
    "See ya"

    Gates to Junkwaste (Ultimate)
    "Welcome to Junkwaste" (enemy/self)

    Item Purshace
    "Gonna help"
    "Beware"
    "Rise of poison"

    Status Related:

    Cooldowns:
    "Wait"
    "Give me time"

    Taking Damage
    "Takem 'em down"
    "We're under assault"

    Stunned or Freezed
    "Ayh"
    "Winter is coming..."

    Critical Health:
    "Restoration..."
    "Im elite, that i survived it"

    Set on fire
    "Ignore..."

    Being healed
    "Thanks"
    "You have back"

    Death
    "Inner defence, prepare"
    "Failed to protect my household..."

    Kills Related

    First Blood
    "Ahhahha... i found my fun piece"

    Kill Assist
    "You may work with me"
    "Great, go with me on 'em"

    Kill Streak
    "Aaaaand, Bam, got another one!"
    "Boom, Boom, Boom, even wider than the Moon, moon, moon"
    "I love when they run, AND i like quotes"

    Kill Taunts
    "Maybe next round of Guardian Competition?" (Inara)
    "And soo stone crumbled" (Inara)
    "A tree, well ok..." (Grover)
    "Who fights with axe, dies from axe *even if the slayer doesn't have one...*" (Grover)

    Objectives

    Capturing the Point
    "Open the gate, we need to let it push"
    "This team is Masterpiece"
    "Do not use fire, i really say to you"


    Enemies on the Objective
    "Enemies on the middle"
    "Wipe them off"

    Match End
    Victory
    "Mine work is done here"
    "Ok, let's go back to Junkwaste"

    Defeat
    "How could i... fail so much?"
    "I must admit, that was... good... offense"


    Lore [Only English]


    The people die, that always happen. One of them goes to Void, some into the Abyss, but somme, comes to Junkwaste. In here, the victims of fate awaits their final Judgment. This sacred kingdom of death is protected by over 200 souls with brave warriors inside it. One of them, is Tox, the young warrior that died from the dragon. His defense skills were so powerful, that he got a possibillity to travel with Gates of Junkwaste whenever he wants. The gates belongs to him. If an enemy from Abyss will strike, Tox can easilly travel to gate to answer the attack. However, Junkwaste is unavailable for all living creatures without a Sacred Bless. If someone will try to enter Junkwaste, he will be knocked with severe wounds. Noone never knew how Junkwaste looks inside of it... and nobody will ever know, 'cause that is true mystery...

    That's all for Tox. I think it should be less annoying than Piggy, that doesn't even got a Lore. I'll say that he's a Grandson of Ratatoskr, with was the Creator of Animals in the realm. To Champion Conquest remains 8 champions. And... concept arts will not appear... because i suck at drawing xD

    Next champion in next 2 Days. [VVGB] Bye!
    Last edited by NapoleonKING; 09-17-2017 at 10:42 AM. Reason: Erase of 3 languages

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    I would like to see a reply... to see what you think about this concept...

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    Quote Originally Posted by NapoleonKING View Post
    I would like to see a reply... to see what you think about this concept...
    No. Making a quality concept is the way to get replies, not whining about it.

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    This is pretty bad. I would even go as far to say that this is "total shit," as you mentioned yourself. The premise is uninspired, and the abilities are not any better. The LMB is unremarkable, and the RMB is just a boring alternate fire. The Q is fine, but the F is an obvious copy of Kinessa's Teleporter. The Ultimate is even more problematic, as it is not only lackluster, but also fails to cover its mediocrity with a clutter of arbitrary effects.

    But the quality of this concept isn't the biggest issue; the biggest issue is you. You refuse to put enough effort into your ideas but still complain about people not commenting. You make a shit concept and get caught up in the fantasy that people actually care enough to become "haters." I'm not the one who likes to trash on another person's work like this, but your attitude is too obnoxious to ignore.
    Congratulations, you've noticed my post.
    I'm your typical nerdy high schooler; pleasure to make your acquaintance. I'm also a chronic gamer who couldn't afford full priced games, a salty Torvald main, and an antisocial logophile. Anyways, it was nice meeting you. I'm sure we'll get along fine. Maybe not, but who cares. Soundcloud?

    My Champion Concepts.
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    Sorry..but I don't see any improvement. I'm not inspired to see this Concept in game..and that is usually how I rate concepts on how good they are. I feel like you're trying too hard to be creative and create something unique and you're not quite grasping what you want to do for a concept..please take your time Concepts do not take a day to make.

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    What's funny is this guy's two concepts have been shit and trash.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Harlequin98 View Post
    This is pretty bad. I would even go as far to say that this is "total shit," as you mentioned yourself.


    You could say it's total Junk. Get it?
    Terminus Main.

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    *Hulking Monstrosity

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    Quote Originally Posted by PWNDdotcom View Post
    What's funny is this guy's two concepts have been shit and trash.
    I feel bad for him since he makes all of the Concepts in 4 different languages...just English would be fine..I don't see many non-english speakers actually posting in forums..not saying they don't read the forums though..but still.

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    This is more like a language exercise rather than a champion concept.
    Champion Concepts:
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    Erik, Lucie
    Flank
    Thomaz
    Frontline
    Bork
    Support
    Nameless, Annie

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    This forum is English ok ,if you want different languages there are separate forums for them because this wall of text is defuring me from even attempting to find the English part of it !!!!

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