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Thread: Naomi, the Might of the Tundra

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    Naomi, the Might of the Tundra

    Disclaimers


    First up, MASSIVE MASSIVE props to TotallyHateit. He helped me with the kit and the card names and the lore.

    The name is a play on the rivalry of Tyra Banks and Naomi Campbell.

    The Actual Idea


    Naomi is my first Front Line concept who can be played as such, but is better when played aggressively. She is good against a team without Drogoz, Androxus, Evie or any Champion with strong aerial abilities. If she does come across these Champions, then Frigid Spear can come in handy. Frost Stomp and Boreal Cage are amazing for area denial.

    Abilities


    Health: 4000
    Speed: 360
    Class: Front Line
    Title: The Might of the Tundra
    Appearance: A tall, well-built woman with a leather quiver holding several spears. She is wearing a fluffy light blue parka and a large bandage wrapped around her arm. She is also sporting a ponytail, blue warpaint under her eyes, and a leg pouch. Her spears have blue bands tied under the ice-carved spear tip.

    LMB: Icicle Spear
    Throw a spear every 0.7s, dealing 550 damage.
    Icicle Spears are heavily affected by gravity and have a medium damage fall off.

    Can headshot.

    RMB: Boreal Cage
    Pierce the ground with one of your spears. This causes eight ice pillars to rise around her in the shape of an octagon. Between the pillars, a 3000 health shield will form. These shields are impassable by enemies and if one shield is destroyed the others will still remain.

    15s cooldown.
    Lasts up to 7s.
    Every shield resembles an Aurora Borealis.
    The cage is slightly smaller than the objective and the shields are 7/10 height of a Fernando shield.

    Q: Frost Stomp
    Stomp on the ground, causing ice spikes to erupt. Enemies caught in the stomp will take 400 damage and will be knocked up for 0.8s. After the spikes disappear, the ground becomes frozen and any enemies standing in this area will be slowed by 30% and take 50 damage per second.

    10s cooldown.
    Lasts for 4s
    The AoE is about the size of the objective.

    F: Frigid Spear
    Throw a spear with a rope attached to it. If an enemy is hit, they will take 350 damage and will be stunned for 1.5 seconds. In addition, you are pulled to the enemy that was hit.

    9s cooldown.
    If an enemy is killed with Frigid Spear, you will not be pulled to them.

    E: Tundral Wrath
    "The earth shatters beneath me!"
    Become empowered by the Tundra and leap high into the air. Once you reach maximum height, you will create a massive icicle from one of her spears and charge at full speed with the power of the northern winds. Upon reaching the ground, you slam the icicle into the ground, dealing 1500 damage to any nearby enemies. In addition, you will massively knock back all enemies and deployables in the radius.

    The landing area is slightly smaller than the objective and the knockback radius is 1.5x size of the objective.
    A mark will appear on the ground where she is going to land as soon as she starts heading that direction. Both enemies and allies can see it.
    1s cast time.

    Cards


    LEGENDARY:
    • Eternal Spectacle [Default] - Boreal Cage gains 1000 health.
    • Cold Feet - Frost Stomp Stuns enemies for 2s instead of knocking them up.
    • Relentless Pursuit - Eliminations reset the cooldown of Frigid Chain.

    LMB/ARMOR: Icicle Spear
    • Avalanche - Increase your fire rate by 7.5%/15%/22.5%/30%.
    • Cold Hearted - Gain 100/200/300/400 health.
    • Sleet - If you lose 10%/20%/30%/40% of your maximum health, gain 15% damage reduction for 3s.
    • Chilling Presence - Eliminations reduce active cooldowns by 7%/14%/21%/28%.

    RMB: Boreal Cage
    • Sturdy - Boreal Cage gains 100/200/300/400 health.
    • Cold Snap - Reduce the cooldown of Boreal Cage by 1s/2s/3s/4s.
    • Tenacity - Increase the duration of Boreal Cage by 1s/2s/3s/4s.
    • Northern Haste - Gain 5%/10%/15%/20% movement speed while Boreal Cage is active.

    Q: Frost Stomp
    • Permafrost - Using Frost Stomp heals you for 50/100/150/200 health.
    • Flash Freeze - Reduce the cooldown of Frost Stomp by 1/2/3/4s.
    • Frostbite - After activation Frost Stomp, gain 5%/10%/15%/20% bonus damage for 2.5s.
    • Hypothermia - Increase the Damage Over Time effect of Frost Stomp by 10/20/30/40.

    F: Frigid Spear
    • Mountain Climber - Reduce the cooldown of Frigid Spear by 1s/2s/3s/4s.
    • Piercing Shackles - Frigid Spear does 25/50/75/100 more damage.
    • Arctic - Increase the range of Frigid Spear by 10%/20%/30%/40%.
    • Unconscious - Frigid Spear stuns enemies for an additional .25s/.5s/.75s./1s.

    Lore


    Naomi was born into the same hunter clan as Tyra; they spent their childhood together and developed a friendship-rivalry relationship and they joined the trials to become huntress together.
    During the trials, Tyra proved herself to be a more than capable huntress, while Naomi kept her performance neck and neck with Tyra's. Despite her talent, Naomi failed the final trial whilst Tyra succeeded.
    Ashamed of her failure, Naomi felt that she was no longer a worthy rival for Tyra, so she left the clan to find what could awaken her inner flame.
    Naomi found herself wandering through the world until she arrived at the Tundra, deep in the heart of Frost Guard.
    Naomi set camp there, hoping that the challenge of surviving in such a dangerous environment would light a fire in her soul.
    Five years pass and Naomi hasn't mastered the Tundra, she became one with it. She gained the power to invoke the fury of the Tundra at her will.

    Naomi now joins the fight in Crosswind Hold to prove herself to Tyra.
    Last edited by QuantumPlays; 04-29-2017 at 10:26 AM.
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    "First up, MASSIVE MASSIVE props to TotallyHateit. He helped me with the kit and the card names and the lore."

    Yep, that's me. I'm not signing autographs right now.
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    Check out my champion concepts!
    Snokko, the Grenadier (Grenade Damage)
    Sophia, the Survivor (Uzi Flanker)
    Lola, the Seraph of Dawn (Solar Healer)
    Naomi, the Might of the Tundra (Tundra Tank)
    Zephyr, the Wind's Whisper (Wind Damage/Flank) [WIP]
    Ru░░░, the P░░ar ░oc░░░░r (Coming Soon)
    M░░░C, the ░bh░░r░░░t D░░id (Coming Soon)
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    Did you just bump after half an hour?

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    Quote Originally Posted by PWNDdotcom View Post
    Did you just bump after half an hour?
    No. I posted this at 7:09 and bumped it at 9:16. I needed to get this one up there. Also, what do you think of my concept?
    Last edited by QuantumPlays; 04-29-2017 at 06:16 AM.
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    Zephyr, the Wind's Whisper (Wind Damage/Flank) [WIP]
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    It's not bad. It's got some good defensive abilities, but the Q seems odd and the F is just Grover's Vine, but with the Dredge Anchor's affects.

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    Finna bump my post.
    Check out my champion concepts!
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    Zephyr, the Wind's Whisper (Wind Damage/Flank) [WIP]
    Ru░░░, the P░░ar ░oc░░░░r (Coming Soon)
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    Hey Evie, your mom's here!
    Well, let's be serious here. My opinion? I really want her to the game.

    Where should I start? Throwing spears are always good to have in a game. You could maybe nerf their firing speed a bit, like 0,1 seconds. Frost stomp is a solid damage and area control ability, which has bot knockback and slowing. When you think about it, it sounds maybe a bit too versatile, but I don't have any problems with it. Frigid Chain reminds me a lot of Trove's Lunar Lancer, and that's why I like it. Being able to move to enemy's location gives you a lot of tactical opportunities, like rushing the point or chasing flankers.
    Then the fun part. Boreal Cage, my personal favorite. I had recently started thinking we couldn't get any more fun, effective and original shields, but then a hero called QuantumPlays comes and absolutely destroys that thought. A multi-part round shield made out of ice spikes and Aurora Borealis? Shut up and take my money! I also love how it's not just another Makoa or Winston shield. It gives you good, sustainable protection, but you can still be damaged from above. Genious.
    And the ultimate. Tundral Wrath. An awesome killer leap, which deals 1500 damage and knockbacks enemies. How cool would that be in the game?
    Overall, an amazing concept. I hope this gets some recognition.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MrMacju View Post
    Hey Evie, your mom's here!
    Well, let's be serious here. My opinion? I really want her to the game.

    Where should I start? Throwing spears are always good to have in a game. You could maybe nerf their firing speed a bit, like 0,1 seconds. Frost stomp is a solid damage and area control ability, which has bot knockback and slowing. When you think about it, it sounds maybe a bit too versatile, but I don't have any problems with it. Frigid Chain reminds me a lot of Trove's Lunar Lancer, and that's why I like it. Being able to move to enemy's location gives you a lot of tactical opportunities, like rushing the point or chasing flankers.
    Then the fun part. Boreal Cage, my personal favorite. I had recently started thinking we couldn't get any more fun, effective and original shields, but then a hero called QuantumPlays comes and absolutely destroys that thought. A multi-part round shield made out of ice spikes and Aurora Borealis? Shut up and take my money! I also love how it's not just another Makoa or Winston shield. It gives you good, sustainable protection, but you can still be damaged from above. Genious.
    And the ultimate. Tundral Wrath. An awesome killer leap, which deals 1500 damage and knockbacks enemies. How cool would that be in the game?
    Overall, an amazing concept. I hope this gets some recognition.
    Your aid is appreciated.
    Check out my champion concepts!
    Snokko, the Grenadier (Grenade Damage)
    Sophia, the Survivor (Uzi Flanker)
    Lola, the Seraph of Dawn (Solar Healer)
    Naomi, the Might of the Tundra (Tundra Tank)
    Zephyr, the Wind's Whisper (Wind Damage/Flank) [WIP]
    Ru░░░, the P░░ar ░oc░░░░r (Coming Soon)
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    Check out my champion concepts!
    Snokko, the Grenadier (Grenade Damage)
    Sophia, the Survivor (Uzi Flanker)
    Lola, the Seraph of Dawn (Solar Healer)
    Naomi, the Might of the Tundra (Tundra Tank)
    Zephyr, the Wind's Whisper (Wind Damage/Flank) [WIP]
    Ru░░░, the P░░ar ░oc░░░░r (Coming Soon)
    M░░░C, the ░bh░░r░░░t D░░id (Coming Soon)
    I also have a Champion Concept Hub.
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