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Thread: Lola, the Seraph of Dawn

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    Lola, the Seraph of Dawn

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    If you're going to suggest something, please do it nicely.

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    Our idea today is a girl named Lola. She is the protector of the sun and in by doing so, she gained healing powers.

    Abilities


    Health: 2250
    Speed: 360
    Class: Support
    Title: The Seraph of Dawn
    Name: Lola Rosada
    Appearance: A young woman with a toga and various jewelry, including a necklace with a sun locket. Orange ribbons are between her arms, on her Scepter, and crossing her chest are flowing in the wind, similar to Inara. Her skin glows a light orange and she has long, silky, blonde hair. In her hair is a leaf crown with a yellow flower.

    Thanks to my non-gender specific acquaintance OzzyOzzy for making this amazing fanart (excuse the title typo).


    Synopsis:
    Lola is a healer that can be considered a babysitter. Her Solar Plinth can set by a Kinessa while your second one can be on the point healing the Makoa. She needs to be protected, though. Divine Intervention isn’t a “one-v-one” type escape ability. You really should use it to escape to the point. Playing against her forces you to choose Cauterize or Bulldozer, which is what only Grohk could do, until now. Break Of Dawn is a good area denial ability and during her Ultimate, she needs to be shielded as she in Disarmed the entire duration.

    LMB: Scepter
    A staff that creates a channeled beam of energy dealing 65 damage per hit every .1 seconds. The Scepter cannot be manually reloaded and instead recharges when not firing. Effective up to Medium Range.

    Weapon can actually be reloaded in the usual way, but this reload only happens automatically when Lola is out of ammo.

    RMB: Break Of Dawn
    Jolt your staff outwards, knocking back enemies in front of you and dealing 100 damage.

    8s cooldown

    Q: Solar Plinth
    Place a pedestal with 750 health on the ground, sending out pulses that heal 500 health every second. Lasts until destroyed.

    15s cooldown
    Can have up to two pedestals

    F: Divine Intervention
    Dash towards the nearest ally and both become untargetable for 1.5s.

    9s cooldown.
    Immunity starts after dash and can be interrupted if damaged while dashing
    If ally is not within 60 units, ability receives 1s cooldown.

    E: Guardian Angel
    "Let the sun shine!"
    Plant your staff on the ground, healing nearby allies 1000 health every second for 5s and boost their movement speed by 20%. Nearby enemies will be Burned.

    On the word "shine," Lola stabs the staff in the ground.
    During your Ultimate, the staff glows and ribbons around it flow in the wind.
    After your Ultimate, pick up your staff like nothing happened.

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    LEGENDARY:
    • Dusk: Break Of Dawn now Slows enemies for 3s after knockback.
    • Dawn's Guardian: You can place an additional Solar Plinth.
    • Deity: You and your ally become untargetable for 5s after dashing.

    LMB/ARMOR: Scepter
    • Increase your base health by 100/200/300/400.
    • Supernova: Gain 5/10/15/20% movement speed after getting a kill.
    • Increase your reload speed by 5/10/15/20%.

    RMB: Break Of Dawn
    • Solar Flare: Break Of Dawn deals 50/100/150/200 more damage.

    Q: Solar Plinth
    • Solar Plinth heals 30/60/90/120 more health per second.

    F: Divine Intervention
    • Tranquility: Reduce the cooldown of Divine Intervention by 1/2/3/4s.
    • Selflessness: When the immunity runs out, your ally gains 5%/10%/15%/20% damage reduction for 3s.

    Lore


    While Inara was tasked with protecting the Mother, Lola was given the much less important job of protecting Dawn, Paladin of the sun (firm belief that Paladins are deities higher than gods).

    Lola enjoys sleep. But the second the crack of dawn arises, she's up and at it to protect the sun and help people use it correctly.

    When not in her god form, Lola can be seen admiring the sun through a train window and wearing dazzling sundresses and jewelry.

    To Lola, the sun is her deity, her everything, because a new dawn means a new day. And a new day means a new beginning.

    But someone's out there to change everything. Can Lola track them down and find who it is? Her journey lead her to Crosswind Hold. Will she find the delinquent responsible?

    TO BE CONTINUED
    Last edited by QuantumPlays; Today at 09:24 AM.
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    Just wondering, I see you are putting a lot of effort in coming up with new champions.
    Has Hi-rez ever used one - acknowledged or considered all the hard work your putting in?
    I can't help but thinking it's a useless way to spend your time haha :P Just being honest here.
    So don't take my comment the wrong way I think it's cool what your doing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Juvator View Post
    Just wondering, I see you are putting a lot of effort in coming up with new champions.
    Has Hi-rez ever used one - acknowledged or considered all the hard work you[']r[e] putting in?
    I can't help but thinking it's a useless way to spend your time haha :P Just being honest here.
    So don't take my comment the wrong way I think it's cool what your doing.
    Thanks. I really love it when people say that. I do this for fun and to hope one day that one of us concept creators (me, JohnOfAllTrades, Tekron, Hammerweld, PWNDdotcom) can get something in-game. We're very prolific and that way there's a better chance. Do you have any Champion concepts? Post them in the Champion Concept Hub (check in my signature)!
    Last edited by QuantumPlays; 04-21-2017 at 08:47 AM.
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    LMB - 80 damage per 0.1 second, don't you think that's a bit overpowered? Maybe lower it down to 65.
    Q - Works like Mal'Damba's Q right? Except that it last forever until someone destroys it. Sounds interesting.
    F - Some kind of a shield? Hmmm not quite sure about this to be honest.
    Ultimate - "nearby allies will be burned" wot? Other than that everything else seems fine.

    Good idea, but for me, it needs a bit more tweaking. Keep up the good work, maybe Hi-Rez will actually read this sometime soon :S

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alfoo View Post
    LMB - 80 damage per 0.1 second, don't you think that's a bit overpowered? Maybe lower it down to 65.
    Q - Works like Mal'Damba's Q right? Except that it last forever until someone destroys it. Sounds interesting.
    F - Some kind of a shield? Hmmm not quite sure about this to be honest.
    Ultimate - "nearby allies will be burned" wot? Other than that everything else seems fine.

    Good idea, but for me, it needs a bit more tweaking. Keep up the good work, maybe Hi-Rez will actually read this sometime soon :S
    The Ultimate is like Tyra's fire thingy (but in a circle)
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    My suggestions:

    For her RMB she could use her Scepter to hit enemies in an half-circle in front of her knocking everyone hit back, as a sort of GTFO my ally sort of move. Maybe it could be called Break of Dawn

    For her F she could dash to an ally in her crosshair and give Lola and her ally 1.5 seconds of immunity and when the immunity runs out they would burn enemies around them. Could be called Devine Intervention.

    Let's say a pesky flank is messing with Lelianne (Shameless promotion is shameless). Lola could dash to her knock the flank away and drop a pedestal to heal her.
    Last edited by TotallyHateit; 04-20-2017 at 09:10 PM.
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    Seraph of Dawn means herald or harbringer of a dawn - a new day, new beginning. A light.

    And you named her - lola. Like a 16 old teen working in a boutique shop.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Branzer View Post
    Seraph of Dawn means herald or harbringer of a dawn - a new day, new beginning. A light.

    And you named her - lola. Like a 16 old teen working in a boutique shop.
    The fuck did you expect? Sola?
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    Quote Originally Posted by QuantumPlays View Post
    The fuck did you expect? Sola?
    I don't see much of an issue with Lola. I personally would have called something like Aurora or Lucerna maybe even Lumen.
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    Quote Originally Posted by TotallyHateit View Post
    I don't see much of an issue with Lola. I personally would have called something like Aurora or Lucerna maybe even Lumen.
    I liked your suggestions, so I put them in. Any ideas for Cards?
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